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<< The Rock ’n’ Roll of Crises >>

“Johnny can’t read”
Why Johnny can’t read
Why, Jonny can’t read

is his crisis a crisis
that crisises on
for hundred years

we ‘solved’ intelligence in fifty
we mechanized learning in a quarter
we metaphored into machines any second now

think graduating as humans is a point
as compliance to efficiency,
grading as cheese on a linear scale

with its wisdom but a pattern
as pâté for purity and 1 solution for 3 bodies
grasping BMI computing of minds thinning

Johnny, be good
johnny Be Good
But Johnny, Johnny can’t read.

—animasuri’25

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trigger

“Johnny can’t read” IN: Arendt, H. (1958, not 1954). The Crisis in Education. Partisan Review (Collected into 1961’s “Between Past and Future”), 25 (XXV)(4), 493–420. https://archive.org/details/sim_partisan-review_1958_25_index/mode/1up and https://thi.ucsc.edu/wp-content/uploads/2016/09/Arendt-Crisis_In_Education-1954.pdf

there is always a temptation to believe that we are dealing with specific problems confined within historical, [disciplinary] and national boundaries and of importance only to those immediately affected. It is precisely this belief that in our time has consistently proved false. One can take it as a general rule in this century that whatever is possible in one country [and siloed discipline] may in the foreseeable future be equally possible in almost any other“

<< It Takes a Child to Raise a Village II >>

“The sounds are’a changin’
What was vroom vroooom
Tuut toot honk, tchooky chooook
bang clang chug-chug

is‘a changin’ to fzzzzzsssst
Bleep bleep Ssssshhhhhht
Vvvvvvrt vvvrt vvvvvvrt
sssssh st st ft ft

Tip tip tap tap lookin’ down
Woooosh’n passin’ by
Bzzzzzzzzzzzz overhead
Tsssss delivered by”

Said ol’ Martha-
Gentle-Rockin’-Chair
“creeek creeeek”
warm-woodedly

listin’ in
on ‘er gran’son
play’in’
as she too ever did

—animasuri’25

<< Strategic Acquisition >>




The knight in white armor on a black steed
as imagine-maker is dead, transformers to heed
the clippetheeclob of innovation by calculation

heralding mists of information as mesmeric mélange
eagerly screaming screen for subscribing village children
brandy-gulping simulated stories, ‘n’ maiden’s pillage

by brethren bravery, bringing swords and steel
from battlefield dust voiding clarity for real
blingatheeblingbling as language as if thought

their speak brought structure, order and gain
carves numbers of the data slain on surfaces plain
meticulously repackaged decimals as commerced chain

flaunting measures why care about accuracy
where approximation is the new creep and
repurposed “knowledge”’s endearingly cheap

feeding sugarwater as the new proclaim
hyped up on data diabetes, mellitus for quick reign
the hoodie bearing knight now wields wires

tickling the village funds and scanning retina
chasing attention hunts down debabyproofed streets
plugging into every, yearning, eagerly-leaking brain

wining prizes and earning fame
the knight in shiny system
stands tall, bares no shame

Hippeetheehop, clippetheeclob
Blingatheeblingbling: the knight with a fresh polish!
Hooray! Hooray! Hooray!

as pure strategy
as any thought unworded
neigh, as expressed joy:

remaining to say.


—animasuri’24


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100%humanly bred & penned with wink

For allowing an uneducated poem to become a human-relational UI, and for “The knight with a fresh polish!,” thank you Dr. Williiams, Tim. (2024, Dec. 18) via https://lnkd.in/g2MZgjJJ at Tim Williams, PhD

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#criticalliteracy #criticalpedagogy
#nonelinear_sensemaking #liminality

<< Masculine Missile>>

With hooks, and ropes;
adorning harnesses and safety belts;
claiming base-camps, helicopters and Sherpas

With the latest theory tested to practice;
deep voiced solid narration and epic pep-talks;
tempered steel focus and hardened grit

With paving ways for caravans to follow;
circling the spoils of gained ground;
feeding the fire, trampling the grid

Water mountains they climb.

                —animasuri’24

<< beauty >>

when beauty stares back
from proximity, from tip-toe distance
and with osmosing depth

i am unable to grasp it
as it flows through
consciousness: it undefines

such beauty does not get stuck
not as neurons exciting
not in thought, bouncing off

scraping cranial walls plastered
with blinding minimalism
of anxieties and neurotic echoing surfaces.

such beauty is celebration
beyond cerebral coercion
with willingness undesired

such beauty is you
without eager acknowledgement

                        —animasuri’24

<< Early >>

I wake while sound sleeps
the pumping of blood
from an accelerating heart
trying tinnitus, buzzing into the brain

as far as an eye can see
no bathroom lights, kitchen lights
no late night living room brawls
nor a balcony staring back with a full glass

I wake while songs, sons ‘n’ Sun sleep
a physiological soundtrack underscores singleness:
gurgling interiors, rushing fluid
snapping joints, groans the still could hear

the acidic burn of last night’s dinner
reminds me in early hours: we carry histories
in organs, consequences in flesh;
or so I do. I do.

I wake while counting the rings and ribs
of a slice of tree and a trunk of life
it’s all there, drunken with memory

there is no serenity during one’s wake

                           —animasuri’24

<< Lover >>

I cannot remember your name.
I cannot remember your face.
I cannot, I can not
I can’t recall you.
you are, not to compute

If I force to re-member
lust fills ligaments and limbs
if marking of fuzziness, blurriness,
fogginess if ever a loose model dislocated
in favor of an unpredictable determinant

will we appeal, absurdly:
as bodies bouncing off
what is, what could,
a curvature into a minded murmur
what was of anyone really

if I ever meet you, as by
trigger, a none-memory,
your story, a hint of voice,
an off-the-shelf perfume
your skin as soft as

I will recognize,
with certainty
loved or yearned:

Lover

                        —animasuri’24

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trigger

Sapolsky, R. M. (2023). Determined. A Science of Life without Free Will. NY, USA: Penguin Press. (opposing free will)

Sprevak, M., Colombo, M. (2018). The Routledge Handbook of the Computational Mind. Routledge.

Tallis, R. (2004). Why the Mind is Not a Computer: A Pocket Lexicon of Neuromythology. 2nd edition. Societas.

Tallis, R. (2021). Freedom. An Impossible Reality. Agenda Publishing (in support of free will)

<< I, Drop. >>

Along the chilled chiseled rusticated ashlar
precipitation meets my cheek.

A gentle awakening as of a kiss from that universal lover unknown yet ever around and taken for granted.

Is the drop still whole when shǒu dāo’ed by the ulnar edge of a hand.

Tea drips down my throat. A drop of blood. Life drips the clock from edges of booked shelves.

Its mastery and peace remains; as eyes pass.

—animasuri’24

<< Hand >>

My hand, are you an extractive institution, the palpitator of the prohibited without consent, the weeder of functionality for the belly and urge you serve, the flattener of crosstalk, pushback, checks and spars. Are you the tentacle testing dryness of fertile soils fiddling futility. My hand, are you the conductor of fingers at sleep, slight of hands and sneaky Freudian slips, do you slide under tables fondling brown paper envelopes or stockings alike, protruding the questionable ever unanswerable in the shades and twilight of movements in largesse distracting from the emptiness of words. My hand, do you carry callouses as cradles to civilization building of master’s bate when imagining lands of others to caress yet ever care for by exploitation, hand-eye coordination and umping silences of labor unspeakable outside the gloss of design and architectured relations in empires handled by history. My hand, do you slap, slither, slit and slide. Do you hide in the palm and knuckles of a fist do you frequent trebles or bass or frequencies of grace. Are you daily an absolute beginner and touch the nascency of companionship with tender tips?

—animasuri’24

<< Bureau of Myth >>

When Kafka types, bureaucrats look up. For a hint in time landscapers of paper, form and institute no longer rattle chains and gears for gates of chops bathed in ink-shaped access.

Shaping reds and blacks coloring moves.
Shaping steps of stairs. Shaping heights and polishing glass ceilings. Scraping pits for prescription gratings living lives here and here.

Just for a second a halt heralds a gaze. Readers could be more concerned with what the pencil pusher does, their acts are even less sexy than the words mythologized here.

Did Kafka push a pencil? Chopping heroes are distracting noises between worlds and words of whistling pedagogical battles. Literate noises as bureaucrats look up grooming worldly believes into submission: know this, not that.

Reiterative flows of taxes work sleepy workers waking work, work hard, make work, no love. The writer woks a meal for these meandering minds. Daily diversion from attention to connotations, to stipulations as punctuations.

depth and diverse conversations of listening companionships keeps the mind focused on escapisms to come. The stories that let us be sedated by mere lack of boredom are allowing grievances directed in a spittoon of a film.

criticism as a meme on a fleeing thread, is it. Threat. Excitement of reductions and slow simplicities, where you sit down with the other in silence and sense nerves flow outward in comfort: “It’s good sitting here with you ma’am, sir.” Waiting in line at the clerk’s.

It’s good not knowing you not having to catalogue as proud birds of paradise or roosters defending male hoods. Is it good sitting silently unbothered by the sectioned time lines guard-railed by raiders of open endings.

The ticket ticker tickles patience. When Kafka types on his pillow, accounting enumerates and bureaucrats take notice. “The numbers are mythic, sir. Just tell the next in line a good story,” directed the guidelines and standards.

It’s good waiting to be next in line.

—animasuri’24